homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you have enough time to do the things you want to do? Why?
:There\'s plenty of time, but I\'m not good at it. Because I only go to three academies a week and I am a lazy person, so I don\'t do what I want to do even if I have time.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jordan,
Thank you for making your homework.
I think it really takes effort in using our time wisely.
Hopefully, you\'ll find ways on how you can do the things you want with your spare time. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: There\'s plenty of time, but I\'m not good at managing it. That\'s because I don\'t do the things I want even if I have enough time as I only attend three academies a week, but at the same time, I\'m lazy.
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