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2023-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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What makes a happy home? A happy family makes a happy house. If people are happy, the place is a happy place.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] Do [이름],

 

Thank you for taking the time to answer your homework. It\'s difficult to pinpoint happiness. It\'s a combination of how satisfied you are with your life as a whole and how you feel about it right now. Creating a happy home is one of the best ways to live a happy life. You should make your home a haven where you go every day to recharge.

 

~Teacher Cathy



A happy family makes a happy house.

>>CORRECT!

OR>>A happy family makes a comfortable house.

(In this text, the word \"happy\" appears several times. We can also substitute a synonym in its place.)

If people are happy, the place is a happy place.

>>CORRECT!

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