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학생이 쓴 원문
Happiness is a feeling of pleasure and satisfaction.
In that sense, happiness is a state of mind.
Therefore, pursuiting happiness is depends on your mental attitude.
But we can\'t ignore enviormental elements.
Therefore, in some ways this is correct, in some ways it is not.
강사 첨삭
I agree!
In that sense, happiness is a state of mind.
Therefore, pursuiting happiness is depends on your mental attitude.
But we can\'t ignore enviormental elements.
Therefore, in some ways this is correct, in some ways it is not.
It is a state of mind, so let\'s be happy always!^^
Teacher Andrea
Happiness is a feeling of pleasure and satisfaction.
>> Correct
In that sense, happiness is a state of mind.
>> Correct
Therefore, pursuiting happiness is depends on your mental attitude.
>> Therefore, pursuing happiness depends on your mental attitude.
But we can\'t ignore enviormental elements.
>> But we can\'t ignore environmental elements.
Therefore, in some ways this is correct, in some ways it is not.
>> Therefore, in some ways, this is acceptable but not always.
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