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2023-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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Please answer the question: What are the things that usually make you upset? What makes me upset is that break a appointment Because my schedule is change and trust is lost. Lastly, I get stress out a lot.

강사 첨삭

Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

Please answer the question:
What are the things that usually make you upset?

What makes me upset is that break a appointment
>> It makes me upset when there\'s a broken promise on the said appointment.
OR >> It makes me upset when an appointment is postponed.
Because my schedule is change and trust is lost.
>> That\'s because my schedule has changed, and my trust has been lost.
OR >> That\'s because my schedule has changed, and my trust is gone.
Lastly, I get stress out a lot.
>> Lastly, I get stressed a lot.
OR >> Lastly, I feel a lot of stress.

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