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2023-02-11 · 첨삭 강사 Andrea

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Do you have any allergy? No. I don\'t have any allergy. But I have some foods don\'t eat. They are mushroom, oyster. Because I don\'t like too soft and mushy foods. Not only mushy taste, but also the smell makes me retch. So when my parents give me them to eat, I refuse.

강사 첨삭

As I said earlier, we are lucky for not having any allergies. 
My mom has yeast allergy, so she can\'t eat bread. 
While my sister in law is allergic to seafood. 

Teacher Andrea 

No. I don\'t have any allergy. But I have some foods don\'t eat.
>> No, I don\'t have any allergy but there are some food that I don\' eat. 

They are mushroom, oyster. Because I don\'t like too soft and mushy foods.
>> Those are mushroom and oyster because I don\'t like food that are too soft and mushy. 

Not only mushy taste, but also the smell makes me retch.
>> Not only mushy taste, but also the smell makes me retch.

So when my parents give me them to eat, I refuse.
>> So if my parents give them to me to eat, I refuse. 

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