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2023-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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I\'m agrre. The world is changing fast. I think we should provide information and education. so we need to help them empathize, develop, and live together in society.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [Name]! Thanks for trying to write your essay answer. Keep writing! Keep improving and keep yourself on track.

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

I\'m agrre.

>>> CORRECT!
The world is changing fast.

>>> CORRECT!

OR >>> The world is changing rapidly.

I think we should provide information and education.

>>> I think we should provide the information and better education to people.

so we need to help them empathize, develop, and live together in society.

>>> So we need to empathize with them, develop, and live together in society.

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