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2023-02-14 · 첨삭 강사 Andrea

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Have you ever seen traffic accidents? I haven\'t seen a traffic accident, but I have had a traffic accident. It was in 2021, and I was going to soccer field riding a bicycle. The traffic light seemed to be changed to red light, so I pedaled my bicycle as fast I can. But a car which is turning to the right crashed me. Then I apologize right away and went on my way because I got out of my mind. However, the interesting thing is that I got no injures.

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Teacher Andrea 

 I haven\'t seen a traffic accident, but I have had a traffic accident.
>>  I haven\'t seen a traffic accident, but I had been to one. 

It was in 2021, and I was going to soccer field riding a bicycle.
>> It was in 2021, I was going to a soccer field riding a bicycle.

The traffic light seemed to be changed to red light, so I pedaled my bicycle as fast I can.
>> The traffic light seemed to change from green to red, so I pedaled my bicycle as fast I can.

But a car which is turning to the right crashed me.
>> But a car which is turning to the right hit me.

Then I apologize right away and went on my way because I got out of my mind.
>> Then I apologize right away and went on my way because I was out of my mind.

However, the interesting thing is that I got no injures.
>> However, the interesting thing was I didn\'t have any injures.

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