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2023-02-16 · 첨삭 강사 Andrea

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Could you live in another country for the rest of your life? Yes. If the country is better than Korea. Specifically, I want a place where there are no high buildings. Because it\'s enought to see high buildings instead of blue sky. And the country should have a good internet survice. It is the most important condition

강사 첨삭

I think I can\'t live in another country for a very long time. 
I can\'t even stay in a different city for at least 5 days. 
haha 

Andrea 

Yes. If the country is better than Korea.
>> Correct 

Specifically, I want a place where there are no high buildings. Because it\'s enought to see high buildings instead of blue sky.
>> I specifically want to live in a place where there are no tall buildings because we can see the buildings instead of the blue sky. 

And the country should have a good internet survice.
>> And the country should have a good internet service. .

It is the most important condition
>> Correct 

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