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2012-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Lorraine

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My answer is : Women have the greater role in raising children in most societies. It's just one of those things. Because most men do work all day. In other words, men have not time take care with children. So children always have time with women.

강사 첨삭

Good morning my dear Lisa!   Thank you for always doing your homework. I like the idea you have presented in your essay. Keep it up! See you in class later! ~Teacher Lorraine~ ^^,   My answer is : >> Correct! Women have the greater role in raising children in most societies. >>  Correct! It\'s just one of those things. Because most men do work all day. >> It\'s just one of those things because most men do work all day. In other words, men have not time take care with children. >> In other words, men don\'t have time to take careof their children. So children always have time with women. >> Hence, children always spend their time with their moms.

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