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2012-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hello, MS Jane! Here is going to drop the rain, but yet! Are there so hotter today, too? Then, where are missing word? I didn't found anything. Anyway, This is my homework. 1. Did you have been New York? 2. Let's meet in front of the station at 10:00. 3. I usually have a breakfast at 6:30 in the morning. 4. Paris is beautiful city going to visit. 5. It is not enjoy to skiing by yourself. 6. He doesn't wake up early in the morning. 7. I'm born in London. 8. I'll be home at 7:00 p.m. tonight. 9. My part-time job is in a restaurant. 10. I'm a vacation. I really don't know my homework, but I do my best now! Oh my the sweat came out! Anyway thank you so much!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Sir Steve! Thank you for your composition today. I eally appreciate your effort in doing your homework everyday. I thought this one is easier for you than the previous ones. Well, it\'s quite cloudy here in the Philippines, but it is still so hot. Take care and have a great day! I\'ll call you later. T. JanE ^^ Hello, Ms. [Name]!>> Correct.Here is going to drop the rain, but yet!>> It\'s going to rain here.Are there so hotter today, too?>> Is it hot there again?Then, where are missing word? I didn\'t found anything.>> Where are the missing words? I didn\'t find anything.Anyway, this is my homework.>> Correct.1. Did you have been New York?>> Have you been TO New York?2. Let\'s meet in front of the station at 10:00.>> Correct.3. I usually have a breakfast at 6:30 in the morning.>> I usually EAT breakfast at 6:30 n the morning.4. Paris is beautiful city going to visit.>> Paris is A beautiful city to visit.5. It is not enjoy to skiing by yourself.>> It is not fun to GO skiing by yourself.6. He doesn\'t wake up early in the morning.>> He doesn\'t LIKE to wake up early in the morning.7. I\'m born in London.>> I WAS born in London.8. I\'ll be home at 7:00 p.m. tonight.>> Correct.9. My part-time job is in a restaurant.>> My part-time job is AT a restaurant.10. I\'m a vacation.>> I\'m ON vacation.I really don\'t know my homework, but I do my best now! Oh my the sweat came out!>> I really don\'t know how to answer my homework, but I did my best. I\'m sweating because of this.Anyway thank you so much! >> Correct.

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