homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If there are competitions during leisure activity, it may be stressful.
For example, camping is very popular in korea, it is very hard to reserve a campsite.
So I have to remember the time when reservation site opens.
Could you tell me expressions better than below?
Do you have any medical condition such as hypertension or diabetes.
Do you have any drug allergy?
Do you have any dental problem.
Do you have any shaking teeth?
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Mr. [이름]. I hope I was able to help with the expressions below and I\'m not sure I got it all accurately. I hope you have a wonderful evening with your family. See you tomorrow in class. ~Jane \",
If there are competitions during leisure activity, it may be stressful.
>> If there are competitions during leisure activities, it may be stressful.
For example, camping is very popular in korea, it is very hard to reserve a campsite.
>> For example, camping is very popular in Korea, but it is very hard to reserve a campsite.
So I have to remember the time when reservation site opens.
>> So I have to remember the time when the reservation site opens.
Could you tell me expressions better than below?
Do you have any medical condition such as hypertension or diabetes.
>> Do you have any medical conditions such as hypertension or diabetes?
>> Are you suffering from any medical condition such as hypertension or diabetes?
Do you have any drug allergy?
>> Do you have any drug allergies?/ Are you allergic to any drug?
Do you have any dental problem.
>> Do you have any dental issues?/ Are you suffering from any dental issues?
Do you have any shaking teeth?
>> Do you have any loose teeth?
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