Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If you had one wish, what would you wish for?
Starvation is no problem at all in Korea.
But it is a serious problem in the opposite of Earth.
So if I had one wish I would use it on feeding all those who either go to bed hungry or starve throughout the day.
I should not use this unbelievable power for my own greed.
As a global citizen, I want to make a wish to make a better world for all people.
강사 첨삭
If I have one wish, it is for me to win the lottery but I don\'t know how to paly it. haha
But it is a serious problem in the opposite of Earth.
So if I had one wish I would use it on feeding all those who either go to bed hungry or starve throughout the day.
I should not use this unbelievable power for my own greed.
As a global citizen, I want to make a wish to make a better world for all people.
I got a ticket and asked my husband if he knows how to do it.
Surprisingly, he also doesn\'t know.
You\'re answer is so great!
Teacher Andrea
Starvation is no problem at all in Korea.
>> Starvation is not problem at all in Korea.
But it is a serious problem in the opposite of Earth.
>>But it is a serious problem in the opposite of the Earth.
So if I had one wish I would use it on feeding all those who either go to bed hungry or starve throughout the day.
>> Correct
I should not use this unbelievable power for my own greed.
>> Correct
As a global citizen, I want to make a wish to make a better world for all people.
>> Correct
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