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학생이 쓴 원문
I think I like eating out on the whole.
If it have a lot money. it\'s very convenient. isn\'t it?
and it tastes a good because They are chefs
Even so I\'m a mother and housewife .
I\'m good at cook .
I can everything make bulgogi, rip and japchae and so on .
When I travel,
I check and visit famous restaurants in the area online.
it make enjoy in my life.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [Name]. For me, I usually eat out with my befriend most of the time. I live alone because my husband is far from me so there\'s no use cooking. I like bulgogi and japchae. I often try them when we go to Korean buffet. I\'m hungry now.
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I think I like eating out on the whole.
>>> I think I prefer eating out.
If it have a lot money. it\'s very convenient. isn\'t it?
If it have a lot money. it\'s very convenient. isn\'t it?
>>> If I have a lot of money, it\'s very convenient, isn\'t it?
and it tastes a good because They are chefs
and it tastes a good because They are chefs
>>> It tastes good because they are prepared by chefs.
Even so I\'m a mother and a housewife .
Even so I\'m a mother and a housewife .
>>> CORRECT!
I\'m good at cook .
I\'m good at cook .
>>> I\'m good at cooking.
I can everything make bulgogi, rip and japchae and so on .
I can everything make bulgogi, rip and japchae and so on .
>>> I can cook bulgogi, rip and japchae and so on.
When I travel, I check and visit famous restaurants in the area online.
>>> CORRECT!
it make enjoy in my life.
it make enjoy in my life.
>>> It makes me enjoy my life.
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