homework &
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1) Does Peter live with his father? 2) Do you learn Spanish? 3) Do Andrew and Martin ride their bikes to school? 4) Do they play in the garden? 5) Does Sandy's hamster live in a cage? 6) Do the cats sit on the wall? 7) Do we work in front of the computer? 8) Do you play the drums? 9) Does Steve wear pullovers? 10) Do I clean the bathroom?
I'm interested in traveling.
Collecting travel information is one of my hobby.
If I find it, I do bookmark im my computer or I print it.
I heard a news about Venezia today morning.
Water of city, Venezia is sinking very slowly.
That is sinking by 3~4mm per year.
Venezia is very beatiful city. Whole city is registered as World Heritage by the UNESCO.
I want to go there someday.
Actually my friend Rine is in there.
She is traveling now.
I envy her and I will go there someday.
I also heard a sad news.
Angkor Wat in Cambodia may collapse any moment.
So that will be able not to open.
I have ever gone there. I have a plan to go for my mom
강사 첨삭
Hello my dear Miss. [Name],
Thank you once again for dropping in your composition..
I\'m really hoping that you would still have time to go on a trip..You deserve to do that too..:)
Don\'t envy your friend my dear okay? I know in time, you will experience going on a trip with your mom in a much better place..^^
Talk to you again later Miss. [Name]..
Teacher cam^^
1) Does Peter live with his father?
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2) Do you learn Spanish?
>>correct
3) Do Andrew and Martin ride their bikes to school?
>>correct
4) Do they play in the garden?
>>correct
5) Does Sandy\'s hamster live in a cage?
>>correct
6) Do the cats sit on the wall?
>>correct
7) Do we work in front of the computer?
>>correct
8) Do you play the drums?
>>correct
9) Does Steve wear pullovers?
>>correct
10) Do I clean the bathroom?>>correctI\'m interested in traveling.
>>correctCollecting travel information is one of my hobby.
>>Collecting travel information is one of my hobbies.If I find it, I do bookmark im my computer or I print it.
>>correct
>>I search for it, i do some bookmarks in my computer or print it.I heard a news about Venezia today morning.
>>I heard a news about Venezia this morning.Water of city, Venezia is sinking very slowly.
>>The Water City, Venezia, is sinking slowly.That is sinking by 3~4mm per year.
>>correctVenezia is very beatiful city. Whole city is registered as World Heritage by the UNESCO.
>>correctI want to go there someday.
>>correctActually my friend Rine is in there.
>>Actually my friend Rhine has been there.She is traveling now.
>>Sh\'e on a trip now.I envy her and I will go there someday.
>>correctI also heard a sad news.
>>correctAngkor Wat in Cambodia may collapse any moment.
>>correctSo that will be able not to open.
>>So it will not be available anytime soon.I have ever gone there. I have a plan to go for my mom
>>I\'ve been there and I have a plan to go there for my mom.
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