homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I know that exercise is important. But it is not easy to do. Time is always not enough. And I want do nothing at my rest time. But I have to be changed. So I stared to learn english and I will go to gym as soon as possible.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Mr. [이름]. Good job on this one as well. I hope you are having a good evening. I wish the same things for me but I never get around to doing them ^__^ I can only wish but I wish you the best. Good luck with your plans for self-improvement. I think they are great! See you in class. ~Jane c\",
I know that exercise is important. But it is not easy to do.
>> CORRECT =)
OR>> I know that exercise is important but it is not easy to do.
Time is always not enough.
OR >> There is always not enough time.
And I want do nothing at my rest time.
>> And I want to do nothing in my rest time.
But I have to be changed. So I stared to learn english and I will go to gym as soon as possible.
>> But I have to change so I started to learn English and I will go to the gym as soon as possible.
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