homework
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ESSAY TASK: In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.
If the student has a job because the student wants to make money, that\'s a good thing.
But if the student is poor and has a job, that\'s not a good thing.
In the latter case, the student should be supported by the government.
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In the latter case, the student should be supported by the government.
A: If the student has a job because the student wants to make money, that\'s a good thing.
But if the student is poor and has a job, that\'s not a good thing.In the latter case, the student should be supported by the government.
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OR >> If the student has a job because the student wants to make money, that\'s a good thing. But if the student is poor and trying to have a job, that\'s not a good thing. In the latter case, the student should be supported by the government.
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