Homework

I usually enjoy meeting new people and interact with them. Since I am an extrovert, I like to make friends. However, when it comes to be comfortable with a new person, it differs a lot whether he is or she is be familiar or not. If I meet someone who has similar character with me, it takes short time to be comfortable. I can lead and continuously talk with him. On the other hand, if he has different perspectives from me, it usually takes a little more time to feel at ease. This is because it is not easy to interact and communicate with him and totally empathize with the emotions that he feels. Therefore, I need more time and efforts to sympathize with him. Also, it differs whether he and I have similar interests or not. As the topics that I can talk are various, I can feel more comfortable whenever I am with him. For example, I feel ease when I meet people who like jazz music. Because I can easily talk with them about the theme.

Hi Ye [이름],

Thank you for answering your homework.

One of the greatest, absolutely free treasures is interacting with other people. It is one of the most essential and fundamental needs of a human being. We are fueled by people who make us feel valued and wanted. Even though it might feel a little awkward at first, it might help you gain confidence, which is a huge benefit. Often, the highlight of a day is meeting someone new who makes you laugh, think differently, or just feel good.

 

~Teacher Cathy

 

I usually enjoy meeting new people and interact with them.

>> I usually enjoy meeting new people and interacting with them.

Since I am an extrovert, I like to make friends.

>> CORRECT

OR >> Since I am an extrovert, I like making new friends.

However, when it comes to be comfortable with a new person, it differs a lot whether he is or she is be familiar or not.

>> However, when it comes to being comfortable with a new person, it differs a lot from whether he or she is familiar with me or not.

If I meet someone who has similar character with me, it takes short time to be comfortable.

>> If I meet someone who has a similar character as me, it takes a short time to be comfortable.

I can lead and continuously talk with him.

>> CORRECT

On the other hand, if he has different perspectives from me, it usually takes a little more time to feel at ease.

>> CORRECT

This is because it is not easy to interact and communicate with him and totally empathize with the emotions that he feels.

>> CORRECT

OR >> This is because it is not easy to interact and communicate with him and completely empathize with his emotions.

Therefore, I need more time and efforts to sympathize with him.

>> Therefore, I need more time and effort to sympathize with him.

Also, it differs whether he and I have similar interests or not.

>> CORRECT

OR >> Also, it differs whether we have similar interests or not.

As the topics that I can talk are various, I can feel more comfortable whenever I am with him.

>> As the topics that I can talk about are various, I can feel more comfortable whenever I am with him.

For example, I feel ease when I meet people who like jazz music.

>> For example, I feel at ease when I meet people who like jazz music.

Because I can easily talk with them about the theme.

>> CORRECT