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I think it is more effective to communicate written.
because when someone gets a written paper or letter or e-mail he will think alone about that.
And than he can answer carefully.
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Thank you for this Miss. [Name]!
I think it is more effective to communicate written.
>>> I think it is more effective to communicate through written.
>>> OR: I think it is more effective to have written communication.
>>> OR: I think written communication is more effective.
because when someone gets a written paper or letter or e-mail he will think alone about that.
>>> ( correct ) Because when someone gets a written paper or letter or e-mail, he will think alone about that.
And than he can answer carefully.
>>> And then he can answer carefully.
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