homework
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I think we should determine parents day as a holiday.
There is a parents day already. But it is not a legal holiday. We should think about the difficulty of parents more and more.
We could abolish Gaecheonjeol from national holidays.
Because it is just an ancient and mythic day. People don\'t think deeply about the meaning of the day.
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I think we should determine parents day as a holiday.
>> I think we should establish Parents\' day as a holiday.
There is a parents day already. But it is not a legal holiday.
>> There is a Parents\' day already but it is not a legal holiday.
We should think about the difficulty of parents more and more.
>> CORRECT =)
We could abolish Gaecheonjeol from national holidays. Because it is just an ancient and mythic day.
>> CORRECT =)
OR >> We could abolish Gaecheonjeol from national holidays because it is just an ancient and mythic day.
People don\'t think deeply about the meaning of the day.
>> CORRECT =)
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