homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Some people leave their family after marriage or after university entrance because it is far from home.
I think true independence from parents begins with getting a job.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Mr. [이름]. Thank you once again for taking the time to check the homework topic and for sharing your thoughts. I wonder though how it was for you to leave your parents for the first time. Maybe we will talk about this in one of our classes. Have a good one. ~Jane ^^
Some people leave their family after marriage or after university entrance because it is far from home.
>> Some people leave their families after marriage or after entering university because it is far from home.
I think true independence from parents begins with getting a job.
>> CORRECT =)
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