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2023-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Have a fine day without a cloud~~ 1. Exhaust fumes cause a lot of  pollution , especially in big cities. recycling pollution 2. Everyone should learn to  conserve ( = save) energy. Using lights/lamps only when needed is a good way to do this. conserve converse 3. Nancy is concerned about pollution. This is why she walks to work instead of driving. cornered concerned 4. Biking is much healthier than driving, and it doesn\'t pollute the air. Baking Biking 5. David conserves water by not letting it run when he\'s not using it. run jog 6. I\'d like to conserve water... But I feel dirty if I don\'t shower three times a day! bath shower 7. Many unethical companies dump their waste into rivers. dump give 8. Smog , which is partly caused by exhaust fumes from cars, is a very big problem in many big cities across the world. Smog Smoke 9. Acid rain occurs when pollution in the air is absorbed by water droplets in clouds. Dirty Acid 10. Oil spills pollute sea water and kill marine life. soil spills

강사 첨삭

Hello May!!!


I can see you\'re trying hard to learn. Your discipline is good, keep it up. Keep applying in your daily life what you learn everyday. Knowledge will give you power. Power will give the confidence that you need.  You can do it, if others can, so can you. Enjoy your day! ^^
T. Jeny


Have a fine day without a cloud~~
>>correct
1. Exhaust fumes cause a lot of  pollution , especially in big cities.
recycling
pollution
>>correct
2. Everyone should learn to  conserve ( = save) energy. Using lights/lamps only when needed is a good way to do this.
conserve
converse
>>correct
3. Nancy is concerned about pollution. This is why she walks to work instead of driving.
cornered
concerned
>>correct
4. Biking is much healthier than driving, and it doesn\'t pollute the air.
Baking
Biking
>>correct
5. David conserves water by not letting it run when he\'s not using it.
run
jog
>>correct
6. I\'d like to conserve water... But I feel dirty if I don\'t shower three times a day!
bath
shower
>>correct
7. Many unethical companies dump their waste into rivers.
dump
give
>>correct
8. Smog , which is partly caused by exhaust fumes from cars, is a very big problem in many big cities across the world.
Smog
Smoke
>>correct
9. Acid rain occurs when pollution in the air is absorbed by water droplets in clouds.
Dirty
Acid
>>correct
10. Oil spills pollute sea water and kill marine life.
soil
spills
>>correct

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