Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Sometimes I want popularity but most I want to stay at home with my family. Because I want to be comfortable.
After working on weekdays, I want to rest on weekends, and I enjoy sitting around with my family and listening to their stories and talking about myself.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Miss. [Name]!
Sometimes I want popularity but most I want to stay at home with my family.
>>> Sometimes I want to go to popular ones but most of the time I want to stay at home with my family.
Because I want to be comfortable.
>>> correct
After working on weekdays, I want to rest on weekends, and I enjoy sitting around with my family and listening to their stories and talking about myself.
After working on weekdays, I want to rest on weekends, and I enjoy sitting around with my family and listening to their stories and talking about myself.
>>> correct
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