Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Ye Na,
Thank you for answering your homework. I believe that traveling by train is one of the most convenient options. Bus schedules can vary depending on traffic, but that is hardly the case for the railroad, allowing passengers to make accurate travel plans and move to destinations on time. I was astonished by the train system in South Korea. There are numerous lines connecting various stations. But I know you always take the train, so it has become tedious. However, I believe that boarding a train is one of the best ways to see South Korea for a foreigner like me.
~Teacher Cathy
Train journeys are sometimes very boring.
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OR >> Sometimes, riding the train is very boring.
Because I have a lot of chances to take the train.
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OR >> But I frequently need to take the train.
For example, a business trip or a visit to my parent\'s house.
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I hope to take time on the train to sleep.
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But it is very hard to fall asleep.
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So, I watched Netflix or other OTT services on my iPad.
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