homework
학생이 쓴 원문
WRITING TASK: Aside from eating chocolates, what do you think is best to do to stay positive throughout the day?
I think it\'s good to take a walk lightly. Walking makes me feel better.
And I can organize my thoughts.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, Jessica! Thank you for doing your homework. You did great in answering this question. I am so proud of you! Keep it up! ^^
A: I think it\'s good to take a walk lightly. Walking makes me feel better.
And I can organize my thoughts.>> CORRECT
OR >> I think it\'s good to take a walk lightly. Walking makes me feel better and it helps me organize my thoughts.
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