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학생이 쓴 원문
I think manners are important in our life. It is a small thing but it makes someone’s feeling to others. If I have good manners, someone will remember me well. And it helps you success in life.
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Hello, Mr. [이름]. Thank you for checking out the feedback page and catching up on your homework. I appreciate your sharing your thoughts on the topic. I totally agree with what you said about having manners. It is one of the characteristics of a successful per[이름]. Have a good one and I\'ll see you in class. ~Jane ;)
I think manners are important in our life.
>> CORRECT =)
It is a small thing but it makes someone’s feeling to others.
>> It could be a small thing but it keeps a good impression on others.
If I have good manners, someone will remember me well.
>> CORRECT =)
And it helps you success in life.
>> And it helps you succeed in life.
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