homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What can you say about urban life?
I think urban life is convenient because city has many hospitals,theaters and landmarks.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Dan!
I agree with you there are more opportunities in urban city.
Again, thank you for completing your homework!
See you on Friday~
-T.Jhozel
What can you say about urban life?
>> Correct!
I think urban life is convenient because city has many hospitals,theaters and landmarks.
>> I think that city life is more convenient because the city has many hospitals, theaters, and landmarks.
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