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The junk food isn’t good at body and health
And some healthy foods are delicious but alot of healthy food isn’t
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Hi Henry,
Junk foods can make you feel tired, bloated, and unable to concentrate. Long-term, junk foods can lead to tooth decay and poor bowel habits. And junk foods can also lead to obesity and associated diseases such as heart disease.~ Teacher QUENNY.
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The junk food isn’t good at body and health
>> Junk food isn’t good for your body and health.
And some healthy foods are delicious but alot of healthy food isn’t
>>And some healthy foods are delicious but not all healthy foods taste delicious because we have different tastes, likes, and dislikes.
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The junk food isn’t good at body and health
And some healthy foods are delicious but alot of healthy food isn’t
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