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I am waiting a day that I could speak English fluently.
Learning English is my biggest goal.
If some one bothers me.
They are my two son.
I worried about their future.
Every parents would think that so.
강사 첨삭
Great morning, [이름]ny!
As parents, we cannot deny the fact that we are anxious about the future of our children because we don\'t want them to have a hard time just like we had. I understand this situation for you. I hope everything works well for them.
Have a good day :0
Aki~
I am waiting a day that I could speak English fluently.
>>> I am waiting for the day that I could speak English fluently.
Learning English is my biggest goal.
>>> CORRECT!
If someone bothers me.
>>> If there is someone that bothers me.
They are my two son.
>>> That would be my two sons.
I worried about their future.
>>> CORRECT!
Every parents would think that so.
>>> Every parent would think that so.
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