homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) I have got a nice room.
2) She has got a cat.
3) Jack has got a pet.
4) The sisters have got great teachers.
5) He has got an old bike.
It rained all day today.
Spring has come but it rains frequently these days.
The news said that it rained a third of this month so the crops were damaged by mold.
I feel groomy like the weather and I have no appetite.
Perhaps it would be better. I need go on a diet.
I skipped my dinner yesterday and I walked for excercise to laudry shop that it takes 30 min.
I gained 3 kilogram during Winter.
If I wear a cute onepiece in my friend's wedding, I need go on a diet.
Women used to go on a diet all a year.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name], happy Friday!
Thank you so much for making your homework today..
I\'m worried about you going on a diet my dear because as for me I think you don\'t need to go on a diet, Im certain of that my dear, you\'re very slim!
Anyway, we will be talking about this more on our class..:)
can\'t wait to talk to you again..
Teacher Cam^^
1) I have got a nice room.
>>correct
2) She has got a cat.
>>correct3) Jack has got a pet.
>>correct4) The sisters have got great teachers.
>>correct5) He has got an old bike.>>correctIt rained all day today.
>>correctSpring has come but it rains frequently these days.
>>correctThe news said that it rained a third of this month so the crops were damaged by mold.
>>The news said that it rained a lot and one third of the crops were damaged by mold.I feel groomy like the weather and I have no appetite.
>> I feel gloomy like the weather and I also have no appetite.
>>I feel so gloomy and I don\'t feel like eating because of the weather.Perhaps it would be better. I need go on a diet.
>>Perhaps it would be better to go on a diet.I skipped my dinner yesterday and I walked for excercise to laudry shop that it takes 30 min.
>>I skipped my dinner yesterday and I walked for 3 minutes to the laundry for my exercise.I gained 3 kilogram during Winter.
>>I gained 3 kilograms during Winter.If I wear a cute onepiece in my friend\'s wedding, I need go on a diet.
>>I need to go on a diet because I\'ll be wearing a cute one piece dress on my friend\'s wedding.^^Women used to go on a diet all a year.
>>Women used to go on a diet all year.
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