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I don’t choose yet
And I think that children’s idea is more important than parent’s idea
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Hi Henry,
It is always better that parents and children should decide together on the career they would pursue. Teens can get information about the latest trends while the parents can get their practical experience to the table to make a decision. ~ Teacher QUENNY
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I don’t choose yet
>> I don\'t know what I want to be in the future.
And I think that children’s idea is more important than parent’s idea
> And I think that children’s idea is more important than parents’ idea when choosing their career goals in life.
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I don’t choose yet
And I think that children’s idea is more important than parent’s idea
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