homework
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What would you buy if you won the lottery?
I would buy a most expansive apartment in KOREA,which has spacious space,various communities and luxury furnitures. This has been my aim [이름]ce I was young.
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What would you buy if you won the lottery?
I would buy a most expansive apartment in KOREA,which has spacious space,various communities and luxury furnitures.
>> I would buy the most expensive apartment in Korea, with lots of space, different communities, and high-end furnishings.
This has been my aim [이름]ce I was young.
>> This has been my goal [이름]ce I was a child.
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