Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, T.Donna.
How was your day?
As a matter of fact, I got a sleep too late last night.
That\'s why I was tired whole day.
I received the text from Dr.MJ on my way to the clinic this morning.
He told me that he and a new male manager already arrived at the clinic.
Although I arrived at the clinic early (around 1 hour before our beginning of work), I couldn\'t help but felt guilty.
Meanwhile, we realized our big problem during the morning conference.
Many patients who were more than expected couldn\'t find the proper drugstores nearby.
Hence, Dr. [Name] and I contacted the web design company and made a guide image about drugstore so quickly.
We posted the image on our monitors inside the clinic.
Of course, we did our basic work as well simultaneously.
I am not sure if it was good or bad, anyway, there were not too many patients and clients today, so our staff were not stressed relatively.
T.Donna, I confused my homework, because of the word \"challenge\".
Let me know about it.
See you soon.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Dr. [이름]!
I had a tranquil day yesterday, thank you for asking. You had too much to do on the other hand. I guess the cycle of your days have gone longer for two days since you work seven days a week. I hope that you will get the hang of it.
Anyway, by now you should have gotten used to the eccentric ways of Dr. [Name]. It is true when they say that smart people behave in a different way. ^^ Do not feel guilty of going to work when he got there earlier than you. Meanwhile, adding visuals to step-by-step instructions can focus your clients and patients into details that may otherwise not have been communicated verbally. This is a brilliant idea.
The word \'challenge\' pertains to the difficulties parts of your work according to the homework question. Then, please go over the grammar suggestions below. \'As a matter of fact\" is used when you have mentioned a premise first. For example: \"I am starving. As a matter of fact, I can eat a whole chicken now.\" Here, there is a first part as premise which is \"I am starving.\" before we mention, \"As a matter or fact...\" The other suggestions follow. A job well done!
See you later then!
-T Donna~
>> Correct!
How was your day?
How was your day?
>> Correct!
As a matter of fact, I got a sleep too late last night.
>> Correct!
Or: I slept too late last night again.
That\'s why I was tired whole day.
>> That\'s why I was tired the whole day.
I received the text from Dr.MJ on my way to the clinic this morning.
>> I received a text from Dr.MJ on my way to the clinic this morning.
He told me that he and a new male manager already arrived at the clinic.
He told me that he and a new male manager already arrived at the clinic.
>> He told me that he and the new male manager already arrived at the clinic.
Although I arrived at the clinic early (around 1 hour before our beginning of work), I couldn\'t help but felt guilty.
>> Although I arrived at the clinic early (around 1 hour before our beginning of work), I couldn\'t help but feet guilty.
Meanwhile, we realized our big problem during the morning conference.
>> Correct!
Many patients who were more than expected couldn\'t find the proper drugstores nearby.
>> Correct!
Hence, Dr. [Name] and I contacted the web design company and made a guide image about drugstore so quickly.
>> Hence, Dr. [Name] and I contacted the web design company and made a guide image about the drugstore so quickly.
We posted the image on our monitors inside the clinic.
>> Correct!
Of course, we did our basic work as well simultaneously.
>> Correct!
I am not sure if it was good or bad, anyway, there were not too many patients and clients today, so our staff were not stressed relatively.
>> Correct!
T.Donna, I confused my homework, because of the word \"challenge\".
>> T. Donna, I\'m confused with my homework, because of the word \"challenge\".
Let me know about it.
>> Correct!
See you soon.
>> Correct!
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