Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I am interested in the person behaves with integrity regardless his appreance.
2. People have their own differen moral values according to their life value.
3. His words left a lasting impression on me.
4. We tend to take a normal and peaceful life for granted.
5. He seems to cherish his new car.
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1. I am interested in the person behaves with integrity regardless his appreance.
>> I am interested in a person who behaves with integrity regardless of his appreance.
2. People have their own different moral values according to their life value.
>> OR: People\'s moral values depend on their own values in life.
3. His words left a lasting impression on me.
>> CORRECT~~
4. We tend to take a normal and peaceful life for granted.
>> OR: A normal and peaceful life are often taken for granted.
5. He seems to cherish his new car.
>> OR: It looks as though he cherishes his brandnew car.
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