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Stress is evil for me. The disease I have is a symptom of swelling and fever when I am stressed. That\'s why the hospital says never to stress, but it\'s not easy.
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Thank you for this Ella!
Stress is evil for me.
>>> correct
The disease I have is a symptom of swelling and fever when I am stressed.
>>> OR: I would have symptoms of swelling and fever when I am too stressed.
That\'s why the hospital says never to stress, but it\'s not easy.
>>> That\'s why the hospital says never to be stressed, but it\'s not easy.
>>> OR: That\'s why the hospital says never to be under stress, but it\'s not easy.
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