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When I visited in Italy.
I was taking a bus.
I understood I could transfer the bus within 100minutes.
But I had to get off the bus within 100minutes.
It was not a trans per time.
So I paid a fine 1250dollers for 3peple.
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Hello Ms. [이름]ny!
What a pity! 125 dollars is still a big money for me and of course, we cannot avoid blaming ourselves for such an incident. I know this time, you are familiar I transport in Italy and you won\'t be having the same mistakes again.
Have a good day!
Aki~
When I visited in Italy.
>>> When I visited Italy.
I was taking a bus.
>>> Took a bus.
I understood I could transfer the bus within 100 minutes.
>>> CORRECT!
But I had to get off the bus within 100 minutes.
>>> CORRECT!
It was not a trans per time.
>>> CORRECT!
So I paid a fine 1250dollers for 3peple.
>>> So I paid a fine of 125 dollars for 3 people.
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