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the difference of western POP and K-POP is.
That K-POPs dance more then western POPs.
And K-POPs sing in groups but sometimes western POPs sing more likely alone.
I know that when you want to become K-POPs, you must have a test in a K-POP company to find skilled people.
then practice and have lessons then when you are good enough they make you K-POP.
thank you~🟪
강사 첨삭
Hello Ruby,
Thank you for explaining the difference between K-pop and Western pop. I think becoming a K-pop member in Korea is not that easy. ^ ^
-Rachel
the difference of western POP and K-POP is. That K-POPs dance more then western POPs.
>> The difference between Western pop and K-pop is that there are more dance moves in K-pop.
And K-POPs sing in groups but sometimes western POPs sing more likely alone.
>> And K-pop singers sing more in groups but in Western pop, the singer is more likely to be alone.
I know that when you want to become K-POPs, you must have a test in a K-POP company to find skilled people.
I know that when you want to become K-POPs, you must have a test in a K-POP company to find skilled people.
>> I know that when someone wants to become a K-pop singer, he/she must take a test in a K-pop company to know if he/she is skilled enough or not.
then practice and have lessons then when you are good enough they make you K-POP.
then practice and have lessons then when you are good enough they make you K-POP.
>> Then the person has to practice a lot and have lessons and when he/she is good enough he/she can become a K-pop group member.
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