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I will go in south Africa .
and I will help with teaching children English .
and help if there is needed animals in south Africa .
thank you^^
강사 첨삭
Hello Ruby,
You are indeed a very kind and helpful person. I hope one day, you can go somewhere to volunteer and help! ^ ^
-Rachel
I will go in south Africa .
>> I will go to South Africa.
and I will help with teaching children English .
and I will help with teaching children English .
>> And I will help in teaching English to the children.
and help if there is needed animals in south Africa .
and help if there is needed animals in south Africa .
>> I will also help if there is a need to take care of the animals in South Africa.
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