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학생이 쓴 원문
My skill is to play the violin.
and I like sience and English.
I think I am good at making things like paper crafting or paper folding .
and the reason I am good at thease things are🥁🥁🥁🎨🩰🎻🎹beacause it is all fun
thank you🏳️‍🌈
강사 첨삭
Wow! I\'m looking forward to seeing one of your crafts, Yu Ri!-Faith-
My skill is to play the violin.>> CORRECT
OR I am good at playing the violin.
and I like sience and English.
and I like sience and English.
>> And, I like Science and English.
I think I am good at making things like paper crafting or paper folding .
I think I am good at making things like paper crafting or paper folding .
>> I think I am good at arts like paper crafting or paper folding.
and the reason I am good at thease things arebeacause it is all fun
and the reason I am good at thease things arebeacause it is all fun
>> The reason why I am good at these things is because they are all fun.
thank you
thank you
>> Thank you.
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