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🌈hello!
my homework:I would like that dog for a pet , but my parents dosn\'t like dogs .
and I could not afford a dog too or to feed and grow it too.
but it will be nice to have a dog and peoples could play with them.
and I like dogs but scared of big dogs with sharp teeth🐕‍🦺🐕.
but it will still be good to have a dog^^.
thanks!🐶
강사 첨삭
Hello Ruby!
I guess it would be really nice to have big but gentle and cute dog! ^ ^
-Rachel
my homework:I would like that dog for a pet , but my parents dosn\'t like dogs .
>> I would like to have a dog for a pet, but my parents don\'t want dogs.
and I could not afford a dog too or to feed and grow it too.
and I could not afford a dog too or to feed and grow it too.
>> And I could not afford to have a dog to feed and raise too.
but it will be nice to have a dog and people could play with them.
but it will be nice to have a dog and people could play with them.
>> correct
and I like dogs but scared of big dogs with sharp teeth🐕‍🦺🐕.
and I like dogs but scared of big dogs with sharp teeth🐕‍🦺🐕.
>> I like dogs but I\'m scared of big dogs with sharp teeth.
but it will still be good to have a dog^^
but it will still be good to have a dog^^
>> correct
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