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No because our uniform is so uncomfortable and not good at design
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Hi Henry,
Uniforms can represent the identification of students, the respect for the school, and also the respect of being a student. By wearing uniforms, students no longer have to plan their outfits and do not have to feel insecure about their appearance and social status. And Students won\'t have to go through peer pressure to look a certain way or wear specific fashion brands.
~ Teacher QUENNY
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No because our uniform is so uncomfortable and not good at design.
>>I dislike wearing school uniforms because our school uniform is so uncomfortable to wear and doesn\'t have a good design.
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No because our uniform is so uncomfortable and not good at design
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