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2012-03-26 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) he's - he is 2) he's got - he is got 3) he'd - he had 5) he can't - he can not 6) he didn't - he din not 7) he doesn't - he does not 8) he hadn't - he had not 9) he won't- he will not 10) he wouldn't - he would not Daema-Do in Japan is very close to Busan in Korea. It takes just about 1 hour by ferry. It is shorter than the time to take to go my hometown. But that is other country. Whoever travels to go there are able to use a dutyfree shop. Actually, the purpose to visit Daemado is a shopping, not a sightseeing. I will go there on April. I already bought a ticket to Daemado last Saturday. It was saled very cheap on the internet last Saturday night. I bought it with my friend Hye-Jung who is interested in a shopping. We strated to buy this and that at the internet duty free. Things was already put in the wishlist and shopping basket for a million won. I didn't pay it but if I keep like this, I might close my savings account. Oh my god.

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Hello my dear Miss. [Name], Happy Monday!! Thank you so much for doing your homework and obviously, you did a very good job! Can\'t wait to talk to you again later my dear..:) Teacher Cam^^ 1) he\'s - he is >>correct2) he\'s got - he is got >>correct3) he\'d - he had >>correct5) he can\'t - he can not >>correct6) he didn\'t - he din not >>correct7) he doesn\'t - he does not >>correct8) he hadn\'t - he had not >>correct9) he won\'t- he will not >>correct10) he wouldn\'t - he would not>>correctDaema-Do in Japan is very close to Busan in Korea. >>correctIt takes just about 1 hour by ferry. >>correctIt is shorter than the time to take to go my hometown. >>correctBut that is other country. >>correctWhoever travels to go there are able to use a dutyfree shop.>>Whoever travels there will be able to use a duty free shop. Actually, the purpose to visit Daemado is a shopping, not a sightseeing. >>correctI will go there on April. >>correctI already bought a ticket to Daemado last Saturday. >>correctIt was saled very cheap on the internet last Saturday night. >>It was sold very cheap on the internet last Saturday night.I bought it with my friend Hye-Jung who is interested in a shopping. >>correctWe strated to buy this and that at the internet duty free. >>We started to buy this and that at the internet dutyfree shop.Things was already put in the wishlist and shopping basket for a million won. >>Things were already on our wishlist and shopping basket for a million won.I didn\'t pay it but if I keep like this, I might close my savings account. >>correctOh my god. >>correct

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