homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) he's - he is
2) he's got - he is got
3) he'd - he had
5) he can't - he can not
6) he didn't - he din not
7) he doesn't - he does not
8) he hadn't - he had not
9) he won't- he will not
10) he wouldn't - he would not
Daema-Do in Japan is very close to Busan in Korea.
It takes just about 1 hour by ferry.
It is shorter than the time to take to go my hometown.
But that is other country.
Whoever travels to go there are able to use a dutyfree shop.
Actually, the purpose to visit Daemado is a shopping, not a sightseeing.
I will go there on April.
I already bought a ticket to Daemado last Saturday.
It was saled very cheap on the internet last Saturday night.
I bought it with my friend Hye-Jung who is interested in a shopping.
We strated to buy this and that at the internet duty free.
Things was already put in the wishlist and shopping basket for a million won.
I didn't pay it but if I keep like this, I might close my savings account.
Oh my god.
강사 첨삭
Hello my dear Miss. [Name],
Happy Monday!!
Thank you so much for doing your homework and obviously, you did a very good job!
Can\'t wait to talk to you again later my dear..:)
Teacher Cam^^
1) he\'s - he is
>>correct2) he\'s got - he is got
>>correct3) he\'d - he had
>>correct5) he can\'t - he can not
>>correct6) he didn\'t - he din not
>>correct7) he doesn\'t - he does not
>>correct8) he hadn\'t - he had not
>>correct9) he won\'t- he will not
>>correct10) he wouldn\'t - he would not>>correctDaema-Do in Japan is very close to Busan in Korea.
>>correctIt takes just about 1 hour by ferry.
>>correctIt is shorter than the time to take to go my hometown.
>>correctBut that is other country.
>>correctWhoever travels to go there are able to use a dutyfree shop.>>Whoever travels there will be able to use a duty free shop.
Actually, the purpose to visit Daemado is a shopping, not a sightseeing.
>>correctI will go there on April.
>>correctI already bought a ticket to Daemado last Saturday.
>>correctIt was saled very cheap on the internet last Saturday night.
>>It was sold very cheap on the internet last Saturday night.I bought it with my friend Hye-Jung who is interested in a shopping.
>>correctWe strated to buy this and that at the internet duty free.
>>We started to buy this and that at the internet dutyfree shop.Things was already put in the wishlist and shopping basket for a million won.
>>Things were already on our wishlist and shopping basket for a million won.I didn\'t pay it but if I keep like this, I might close my savings account.
>>correctOh my god.
>>correct
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