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I think yes. As prices rise and various public charges rise. Most of common people especially the young, are having a harder time. so I think the state should promote more convenient and useful public transtprtation. Because I have a son and daugher. I worried about economics. I hope the world my son and daughter will live I want much more comfortable and warm world. Have a nice day. And thank you for your sincere lessons.
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Thank you for this Miss. [Name]! Keep them coming. Have a good day. :D
I think yes.
I think yes.
>>> correct
As prices rise and various public charges rise. Most of common people especially the young, are having a harder time.
>>> As prices rise and various public charges rise, most of common people especially the young, are having a harder time.
so I think the state should promote more convenient and useful public transtprtation.
>>> So I think the state should promote more convenient and useful public transportation.
Because I have a son and daughter.
>>> correct
I worried about economics.
>>> I am worried about economics.
I hope the world my son and daughter will live I want much more comfortable and warm world.
>>> I hope the world my son and daughter will live would be much more comfortable and a warm world.
Have a nice day.
>>> correct
And thank you for your sincere lessons.
>>> correct
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