Homework🌱
학생이 쓴 원문
Nature is very impoartant to me .
Because we can\'t live without nature .
and nature is bueatiful and healthful. it gives many things we want or need.
every thing is nature , and nature is not ours.
It is very impoartant to make nature safe and help out.
thank you
-yuri-
강사 첨삭
You\'re right, Yu RI! We need to take care of nature. -Faith-
Nature is very impoartant to me . Because we can\'t live without nature .>> Nature is very important to me because we can\'t live without nature.
and nature is bueatiful and healthful.
and nature is bueatiful and healthful.
>> And, nature is beautiful and healthful.
it gives many things we want or need.
>> It gives many things we want or need.
every thing is nature , and nature is not ours.
every thing is nature , and nature is not ours.
>> Almost every thing around us is nature, and nature is not ours.
It is very impoartant to make nature safe and help out.
>> It is very important to make nature safe and preserved.
thank you
It is very impoartant to make nature safe and help out.
>> It is very important to make nature safe and preserved.
thank you
>> Thank you!
-yuri-
-yuri-
>> -Yuri-
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