homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think traveling is important? Why or why not?
:I think traveling is important. Because I think I can understand the culture of other countries and build wider knowledge through travel
강사 첨삭
Hello Jordan,
Thank you for submitting your homework. I hope that you\'ll be able to travel to more places. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
I think traveling is important. Because I think I can understand the culture of other countries and build wider knowledge through travel.
>> I think traveling is important because I can understand other countries\' cultures and build wider knowledge through it.
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