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학생이 쓴 원문
There is a old saying in Korea.
Man could cry only three times.
When they born , their parents’s death and their country is gone.
I thought that adult must not cry.
And adult don’t have to appear dropping tears to others.
Of course I am not a man But I am also
an adult.
강사 첨삭
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There is a old saying in Korea.
>>There is an old saying in Korea.
Man could cry only three times.
Man could cry only three times.
>>A man can only cry three times.
When they born , their parents’s death and their country is gone.
When they born , their parents’s death and their country is gone.
>>When the were born, their parents died and their country was gone.
I thought that adult must not cry.
I thought that adult must not cry.
>>I thought that adults shouldn\'t cry.
And adult don’t have to appear dropping tears to others.
And adult don’t have to appear dropping tears to others.
>>And, adults don\'t have to show tears to others.
Of course I am not a man But I am also an adult.
Of course I am not a man But I am also an adult.
>>Of course, I am not a man but I am also an adult.
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