Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Ella,
Love, support, trust and optimism from their family make us feel safe and secure and are powerful weapons against peer pressure, life\'s difficulties and disappointments. People value family support for a variety of reasons, the majority of which are related to their own well-being. Family is important to people because it can improve a person\'s physical, emotional, and mental health and provides unique benefits.
~Teacher Cathy
What encourages me is the support of my family.
>>CORRECT
OR>> The support of my family always encourages me.
It\'s because you always support me and help me when I\'m having a hard time or when I\'m sad.
>> It’s because they’re always by my side and help me when I’m having a hard time or sad.
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