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I saw TV yesterday and it was about super heros .
I know everyone can be super heorose and they have superpowers.
first close your one eye then point your finger upwards the sky.
ten look at it and open your other eye it is like you are looking througe your fingerlike this we can all have superpowers .
you can be a super heoro too by and have a good time dowing superpower tricks.
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Hello Ruby,
I guess we all are heroes in different ways except that we are not famous like Superman. If we do our best to help others, that can count as being a hero. ^ ^
-Rachel
I saw TV yesterday and it was about super heros .
>> I watched TV yesterday and it was about super heroes.
I know everyone can be super heroes and they have superpowers.
I know everyone can be super heroes and they have superpowers.
>> correct (heroes is spelled HEROES)
First close your one eye then point your finger upwards the sky.
First close your one eye then point your finger upwards the sky.
>> correct
ten look at it and open your other eye it is like you are looking througe your fingerlike this we can all have superpowers .
ten look at it and open your other eye it is like you are looking througe your fingerlike this we can all have superpowers .
>> Then look at it while opening your other closed eye. If you are looking at your finger like this, we seem to have superpowers.
you can be a super heoro too by and have a good time dowing superpower tricks.
you can be a super heoro too by and have a good time dowing superpower tricks.
>> You can be a super hero too and have a good time doing super power tricks.
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