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학생이 쓴 원문
When I miss my mom, I do activity.
I ask my sister to bring my mom to a good place. And we meet together there.
We will go to a good restaurant and visit beautiful place.
If it’s not possible. I call my mom with video calls.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름]ny!
We have different ways how to keep in touch with someone and make us happy. I admire how you care for your mom.
Have a good day and See you.
Aki~
When I miss my mom, I do activity.
>>> When I miss my mom, I do an activity.
>>> Whenever I miss my mom, I do a certain activity.
I ask my sister to bring my mom to a good place. And we meet together there.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> I usually ask my sister to bring my mom to a good place and we meet there.
We will go to a good restaurant and visit beautiful place.
>>> We will go to a good restaurant and visit a beautiful place.
If it’s not possible. I call my mom with video calls.
>>> If it’s not possible. I call my mom via video calls.
>>> If it’s not possible. I call my mom through video calls.
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