homework
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Mr. [Name] arrived in New York 1., in) May 10 2.(at,) eight o’clock 3.(in, the evening. He decided to call his uncle who lived on Fifth Avenue. He got on a bus 4.(at, ) the
station and put his fare 5.(on,) the farebox. The bus was very crowded, so Mr. [Name] had to stand up all the way. When he reached 85th Street, Mr. [Name] got off the bus and walked a short distance 6.(in) the apartment building 7.(in, which his uncle lived. He knocked 8.(at,) the door 9.(of his uncle’s apartment. He waited 10.(for a few minutes, but no one came at the door. He was disappointed to find no one at home. He didn’t know where to go because his uncle had promised to reserve a room for him at a downtown hotel. He saw a bench at the end of the hall, and he sat down on it to wait for his uncle.
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Hi James. Good job for this one! ^_^
T. Irene
Mr. [Name] arrived in New York 1., in) May 10 2.(at,) eight o’clock 3.(in, the evening. He decided to call his uncle who lived on Fifth Avenue.
>>> Mr. [Name] arrived in New York 1., on) May 10 2.(at,) eight o’clock 3.(in, the evening. He decided to call his uncle who lived on Fifth Avenue.
He got on a bus 4.(at, ) the station and put his fare 5.(on,) the farebox. The bus was very crowded, so Mr. [Name] had to stand up all the way.
>>> He got on a bus 4.(at, ) the station and put his fare 5.(into,) the farebox. The bus was very crowded, so Mr. [Name] had to stand up all the way.
When he reached 85th Street, Mr. [Name] got off the bus and walked a short distance 6.(in) the apartment building 7.(in, which his uncle lived. He knocked 8.(at,) the door 9.(of his uncle’s apartment.
>>> When he reached 85th Street, Mr. [Name] got off the bus and walked a short distance 6.(to) the apartment building 7.(in, which his uncle lived. He knocked 8.(at,) the door 9.(of his uncle’s apartment.
He waited 10.(for a few minutes, but no one came at the door. He was disappointed to find no one at home. He didn’t know where to go because his uncle had promised to reserve a room for him at a downtown hotel. He saw a bench at the end of the hall, and he sat down on it to wait for his uncle.
>>> Correct.
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