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I traveled to Nepal. Although the road is dusty and unpaved and I sometimes felt uncomfortable, I could experienced huge nature. One of the amazing experiences is the trekking. I did around Annapurna for 7days and it gave me forgettable memories and brave in my life. It\'s totally worth to accept to inconvenience.
So I want to challenge a longer trip one day again. The food is also wonderful and it goes well with korean\'s taste. My favorite Napali food is momo and herbs tea. Momo is a king of dumpling. I miss it.
강사 첨삭
Wow, thank you for sharing such wonderful experiences from your travel to Nepal! Reading your composition tempted me to visit Nepal someday and try out their food. You gave a lot of details and you did so creatively enough to allow your readers to imagine the things you did. Great job!
~T.Harmony <3
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Although the road is dusty and unpaved and I sometimes felt uncomfortable, I could experienced huge nature.
>> Although the road was dusty, unpaved, and I sometimes felt uncomfortable, I was able to experience a lot of nature.
One of the amazing experiences is the trekking.
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I did around Annapurna for 7days and it gave me forgettable memories and brave in my life.
>> I trekked around Annapurna for 7 days, which left me with unforgettable memories and courageous moments in my life.
It\'s totally worth to accept to inconvenience.
>> The wonderful experiences outweighed all of the inconveniences.
So I want to challenge a longer trip one day again.
So I want to challenge a longer trip one day again.
>> So I want to challenge myself to a longer trip again someday.
The food is also wonderful and it goes well with korean\'s taste.
>> ...it goes well with a Korean\'s palette.
My favorite Napali food is momo and herbs tea.
>> Two of my favorite Nepali food are momo and herbs tea.
Momo is a king of dumpling.
>> CORRECT!
I miss it.
>> CORRECT!
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